TAKE A DEEP BREATH, AND SUBMIT
(Every year the Society of Southwestern Authors sponsors a writing contest for writers of fiction, nonfiction, and poetry. The SSA contests are open to non-members, so entries come in from all over the country. This year was the first time they included a category for first-chapter, novel submissions. I think they were a bit overwhelmed when thirty entries hit their mailbox.
Winning entries are published in SSA’s annual publication—The Storyteller; however, only the first page of each first-chapter entry is included in the hard-copy publication (space constraints.) But, thanks to SSA’s wonderful techie types, digital files are now up and running on their website, meaning that the winning chapters can be read in their entirety.
I’m guessing you suspect this is more than an info dump about the SSA contest. Right you are, of course.
Sometimes you just have to take a deep breath, fill out the entry form, and pop that sucker in the mailbox, and trust me, every single time a little bit of your heart goes with it. Yup, even though Dancing Between the Beats is still undergoing final revisions, I entered the first chapter, Enter Stage Right, anyway. I entered without expectations, but paid the extra fee to receive written critiques from the judges. Always invaluable in any contest.
So, imagine my surprise when I received an email, not just with critiques attached, but with an invitation to the awards ceremony (yesterday), because my chapter won an Honorable Mention (that means 4th or 5th out of 30). I’ll take it! I’d expected to end up on the “to be shredded pile.” I'm quite pleased. If interested, here’s the link to the full first chapter: (P.S. - May 22. Just FYI, since the contest, the first chapter, particularly the first page, has been revised, and consolidated. Might pop it in to another post. Much better.)
I worried and stressed over having to read an excerpt, but I survived the mike, and if you want to read just the bit I read at the ceremony, you can find that here:
DANCING BETWEEN THE BEATS In ballroom dance, movements blend over the beats. This merging of movement means that one dances “between the beats” rather than on each beat of music. In this respect, dance is like life. We live, as we dance, between the beats.
While DBTB offers an insider’s view of the ambitions, ethics, and rivalries in the world of ballroom dance, it’s also grounded in the veracity of human nature. The spine of the story is our need to belong, to find our tribe. The secondary theme is how we react when expectations clash with reality, and the status quo unexpectedly shifts. When motives, priorities, and relationships are re-evaluated, the rose-colored glasses come off.
Chapter One introduces three main characters: studio owner, Katherine Carrington; Dance Master, Marcos Stephanos, and the new hire, Paige Russell. This excerpt is from Paige’s section.
Paige cupped her hand protectively around the lit match. The feeble flame arm-wrestled with the wind, fighting for its few seconds of life. Cigarette clamped between her teeth, Paige increased the shield, tightening the curve of her hand and bending her head until her nose twitched from the pungent scent of phosphorous. She, by God, needed this cigarette, and right now. Damn this wind anyway, and the neighborhood idiot who was stinking everything up with mesquite-wood fumes. If she wanted smoke in her lungs, she would smoke.
Paige leaned against the old Eucalyptus tree in the corner of the back parking lot. The wide trunk made a great shield against the wind. Her pale cheeks hollowed as she dragged hard to light her cigarette, pushing the tip deep into the base of the flame. The delicious scent of tobacco filled her nostrils and a gentle stream of smoke swirled through her fingers. She’d started smoking only two years ago, but the habit was so embedded, it was as though she was born with a cigarette clutched in her tiny baby fist. Without her smokes, she was a bundle of hot-wired nerves. She hated herself for her weakness, even as she closed her eyes in pleasure. Smoking brought her back from the brink of insanity, but landed her on the ledge of despair.
“I’m such a mess,” Paige muttered, shaking her head. There were still too many mornings when her mother’s face was the first image that popped into her head. Sometimes she would wake up thinking she heard her voice. Grief doesn’t march through five neat stages. That’s complete bullshit. Grief spirals and turns back on itself. It hides, and then springs out at you like a lunatic ghost in a not-so-fun Halloween corn maze.
“How can I miss my mom so much,” she said to the wind, “and still be so damn confused and mad at her all at the same time?” Paige felt angry tears damning up behind her eyes. She blinked rapidly to stop them from spilling over. The quickly moving clouds almost obscured the blue desert sky she had so come to love. Dirt-filled dust devils ripped hidden bits of litter from under the bushes, creating a careless collage of rubbish, only to dump the discards helter-skelter. The exposed litter reminded Paige of an old saying of her mother’s—something about not airing your dirty laundry in public.
Paige’s shoulders slumped and a familiar hollow bubble began to form in the pit of her stomach. She had to stop thinking about herself as dirty laundry—someone’s dirty secret. Paige ached to confront, and cry, and scream, “Why, Mom? What was so bad that you couldn’t tell me?” But you can’t ask a dead person questions
Joshua D Cochran
4/14/2019 05:28:43 pm
I'm not surprised by the honorable mention. Congrats! Woot! A sign that you're onto something. As a fan and a reader of the entire novel, I honestly can't wait until a copy is sitting on my shelf.
4/20/2019 10:25:02 am
I think you'd be proud of the revising I've done. Strengthened the last few chapters and lots of general tightening. You are first on my list for an invite to a launch party !
4/14/2019 06:59:38 pm
Thank you, Joshua. Can hardly wait until you can come celebrate at a launch or release party.
4/15/2019 08:44:34 am
Sounds like Dancing Between the Beats is a novel I will want to read!
4/20/2019 10:25:37 am
For sure, Rita. Thank You. Will keep you posted on progress.
4/16/2019 04:47:40 pm
Well done, Lady.
4/17/2019 10:45:09 am
I too am not surprised that your 1st Chapter was recognized. I am so looking forward to the completion and publication of the novel so I can dive into it!
5/8/2019 05:38:30 pm
Ok! I read this chapter and am ready for the rest of it! So good, I loved the sense of place (visine, haha). Also the pacing--it feels like something is about to happen...Good for you to do this and to get it to fruition!
5/10/2019 01:43:41 pm
I so appreciate you taking the time to read this. Thanks for the encouraging words :)
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